I agree, the slol did go a bit messed, but its not that bad in all fairness. I think you should redo the solo to really show off though. Lots of partial chords following the chord structure would work well, i think :)
But i have one question. Just for my common curiosity, is the instrument that comes in with at about :15 a theremin? If not, what is it, cause id like to use it in my own composing
Great song, very relaxed, i like it :)
you're not the first person to think that but it is actually a dance piccolo in the nexus vst. thanks for the review.
But I have a few suggestions...
Have you thought of a drum fill after the bridge, maybe the four bass drum beats, then some massive crazy drum thing? Im no expert on drums, so discard that if you want.
But maybe a proper heavy guitar solo is needed here near the end (after the drum fill after the bridge?) to really show off. Then it can continue like the first solo. If you really want to do this, heavy distortion, low bass, middle middle and high treble, and use the minor pentatonic scale with a few partial chords mixed in. Find a couple of nice sounding riffs, and repeat them over and over in the verse :)
Other than those little things, I can find no fault with this song. I think maybe the vocals are a little off at some places, but that is expected with Brit pop, i think.
...but im not sure really like the guitar tone, sorry. But its solid work, and for that reason its a 10/10. The tone things probably me being too picky
This made me lol so much!!! Well done, very funny work!
I like how this song keeps building, but i think you should use a different instrument instead of the harpsichord sounding one. But i love how it changes at 1:50, well done! However, could do with a different melody, its a little too repetative to be honest. Sorry, but for those two reasons, its a 9/10
This is great, but its not long enough! I cant remember how long the original was, so im sorry if im amking an ass of myself, but, i want this song to be at least 3 mins long!!!
For what it is, its alright, not amazingly good, unfortunately. And I generally hate looped songs, and you havnt even come up with your own stuff???
Nope. I only use loops, I don't like improvising.
When i first heard this i thought, oh, he's gone all peaceful. Then the guitar kicked in at 2:18. OMG, this is AMAZING!!! Seriously, I love all of your work, and I love the fact that you have stuck to your guns and kept the punk feel. Great song :)
I think u did do justice to the ParagonX9 version, and can't see how anyone would hate you for trying to remix it. I'm loving this. Chaoz fantasy is probably my all time fav ParagonX9 track, and this follows the tune close enough that I love it, but i also enjoy a lot of metal (Iron Maiden, System of a Down etc). The only thing im not too sure about is the bit at 0:22, when the metal bit properly begins, it just sounds out of place to me. But it's probably just me and the rest of the song more than makes up for it. Well Done, and Good Luck with the rest of your composing!
Thanks! as for the 0:22 part I was just sticking to original track my man.
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